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Ok this isn't exactly unfinished, it was scrapped because the only way this looked decent was by making too similar to a past work. But in the end both are mine and since it just turn out bad and not terribly bad, i might as well post it.

Stock - ~Dan14Stock
Texture - *resurgere
Brushes - *aleksandra

Alive

How was I to know
Everything's made to end
The affections lost
In this violent storm
Of the ones you know
Tear everything away
Tearing through your soul
As to cleanse it from all good
Nothingness is left
Darkness upon the light forgotten

(Let the fear prevail)

Black and white all is
Nothing in the middle to choose
The only way
Strip away all the feelings
Always numb to stay
Go ahead with the flow
That's the only way
Not to get the pain


No matter how big are the stakes
This is what i am
And maybe it's a mistake
I refuse to embrace
So i strip away the hate
and i choose to feel



It's too cold in here

Black prevailed on white

The storm won

But in the end
It took all away
Leaving only one thing
The one that matters most
No affection is left
But it could not eradicate
The feelings I have
It could not remove
The only thing sure
At the end of all this
I"m still...

Alive

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Looks good :clap:

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thank you

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"I'm dancing in the ashes of the bridges I've burned."
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nice work, looks really great
lovin the texture

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:iconzapzoum:
this is a beautiful work , i love the texture as much as the composition , and the text is the finishing touch , well done :clap:
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beautiful composition, i like the way you put the text, and the texture is very nice
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Stock ~d0gma / Photography ~s-photography
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Bellissimo, la poesia è fantastica... :+fav:

"tutto quello che posso fare è abbracciarti forte e tenerti stretto a me"

:heart:

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MAISPEIS
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thanks :hug:

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"I'm dancing in the ashes of the bridges I've burned."
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Thanks my friend :hug:

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"I'm dancing in the ashes of the bridges I've burned."
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Thank you

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"I'm dancing in the ashes of the bridges I've burned."

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May 10, 2004
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