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I worked on this on and off during the day, not sure about it but this is the final result

Stock - ~psymph

Within A Dream

Just Wait
wait for me, within a dream
within a breath, will you be there?
Maybe yes, or maybe no. The wit is too long
Who am i to ask you to stay? I have no right to
Do this thing. The tears are cold, like my mind like my
Body, their root, the core from where they come.
And i’ll be here, among the pure, amore the white souls...
So pure, oblivious to it all, or am i to sensible to it all?
I’ll still be here in the end, alone again with only a mirror ahead
The reflection of what i am, staring back at my with sad black eyes.
Waiting, for nothing, for you, for something, someone else, no one really
And then I want to scream, but what is that for? The pure are deaf...

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:iconshadowvampire:
Man honestly....:sadangel: I have to be honest and this.... well I dont know what is wrong with you today.... :no:

But this is fucking awsome!!!! :headbang: I really like it :nod:

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:evileyes:Lord :skullbones: Shadow :evileyes:

An ordinary guy with a sick mind
:icons-yl:
Thanks dude, glad you do. I really wasn't sure about it

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"I'm dancing in the ashes of the bridges I've burned."
:icons-andr-a:
That's ... gorgeous ... i love the words you wrote ... i couldn't write anything like this ...
(i can't write any poetry neither :/ )
Very beautiful composition sweet :)

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S.a.n.d.r.A
Stock ~d0gma / Photography ~s-photography
:iconmaky:
Bellissima la foto che hai scelto... mi ricordo (manco fosse passato un secolo) che ero da te quando me l'hai fatta vedere. Volevo usarla anch'io, ma non sapevo proprio come.

Per quanto riguarda la poesia... beh come sempre non sono sicura di averla capita al 100%, ma... io ti sarò accanto ogni giorno, in ogni istante, anche se saremo separati dalla distanza fisica... sei il mio primo e costante pensiero. Ti amo :heart:

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:butterflytwo:
MAISPEIS
:iconyarska:
I`m trully in love with manky´s comment..... :love: and now I want to scream 2!!!! There is a Portughese poet who says "the poet is a lier" I hope you agree with him. We may pretende thousands of feelings, but I do believe that what you write, you write from the heart. This one is one more gift from you. :clap:

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beauty lies in the eye
:iconcrystalcage:
that ending
damn- blew me away

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"Would you be there, when the lights get shot out?!" CL
:iconcaddman:
Nice design...Really like the words...:nod:

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“Wait until you see what the Caddman is Painting”
:iconpsymph:
Whoa..... I was hoping someone would come along and use this stock image, and you've made it into something truly incredible and beautiful!
Thank you very much for using my pic, and I'll be sure to visit your gallery in the very near future! :D
Oh yeah... :+fav:

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share your kindness, not your hate.
love the art, before yourself.


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Thank you, glad you like it. Your picture was really helpful

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"I'm dancing in the ashes of the bridges I've burned."
:icons-yl:
thanks again my friend

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"I'm dancing in the ashes of the bridges I've burned."

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